Teen Poetry #3 |
This night |
Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
I didnt write this a friend of mine did so i take no credit i just thought you would like to read it is is beautiful he wants to make it a song that is why there is like a chours type thing he doesnt think it is very good but i do I've been waiting so long to feel your kiss again All those nights I wondered aimless and out of my head Will it always be this way, you and me in this night Will it always be this way, will it always be this night You never look as beautiful as you did way back then And I'll never look at you, no I'll never look at you with those dool eyes again, my doll eyes again Will it always be this way, you and me in this night Will it always be this way, will it always be this night I kissed you in the door way my eyes close tight and i cannot see I kissed you good night and you kissed me good bye soon enough you'd leave me |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Your friend has a talent that could turn to much much more... *~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~* |
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liqwidnik Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 33Mantua, NJ, USA |
i can just imagine who wrote this. It's beuatiful and make sure you tell your friend that |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great one here. I liked it a lot. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
I think you need to tell your friend to shout "move over eminem... here i come" LOL j/k but no seriously i love this! he is talented HEHEHE *do not offer yourself to the world, yet let the world offer itself to you*--Me :) |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Your friend has done a great job... Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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