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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Concentrating on the new life I've built. Wishing for less pain. Diversions and temptations cloud my thoughts. Does it mean anything to them? I try to build a wall around my past and step up to the present, My love is fading...My determination faltering. Concentration is key, Yet I wander in my convictions. Life altering roughness, Save face quickly, Was it ever really worth it? Am I ever really noticed? (Don't condemn those who know no better....At least not until you've walked in their shoes.) |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, I know what you are talking about. I can't judge people by what they look like on the outside, you just have to get to know them. Very strong poem, and I liked it. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It just maeks me wonder what exactly you have done or what was done to you for you to write such a poem. As I have said, I'm amazed by you ability to use words. You a obviously very talented..that is a given  keep writing girlI see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Jenn- this is a great poem. I got the same feeling out of it as acire, wondering what you've done or think you've done. Anyway, I like this |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
HEy this poem was nice. I liked what you said in the parenthesis too. You're right. Anyway great job!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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