Teen Poetry #3 |
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Girls Can Be Disappointing |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Tell me why I can't see through your lies My friends always tell me and parents have warned me I didn't listen and now I am filled with sorrow and distrust I need someone to hate, but I can only hate myself Because Iam the one who let it go on for so long [This message has been edited by TrueLUV (edited 07-19-2000).] |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
It's so true, more power to ya man. You always have to watch out with them. You're new here aren't you? |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
Yes girls can be very disappointing, after all we're human as well. I can identify with the feelings in this poem, even though I am not a guy. Scary thing is you sound exactly like my ex, so much so that I had to check your profile and compare E-mail addresses. Freaky!! LOL ![]() Love, Crystal When a door closes, another door of oppurtunity opens. The only problem is that most of us are so busy looking at the closed door that we fail to see |
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Alex Sankowich Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 28North Carolina, USA |
Not all girls are disappointing, yo. Just gotta find that special someone. Good luck to ya. -- "True love lasts forever." "Heroes get remembered, but legends never die." |
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ashley cain Junior Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 30Texas |
Hey, I'm a girl, but I feel ya. In the switch around, guys can dissapoint too. Great poem |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
You know relationships all around suck... I know this, but the problem is guys can be just as dissapointing as girls. I wish I could say there is a dominant sex in this aspect, but I'm afraid not. I hope we all meet that "someone" Jenn |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, I know the feeling. I am not a guy, but i know that we can get a little out of hand, but not all of us are that bad. I hope that you find that special someone, because if you live without them you don't know what you are missing. Just keep your head up. I liked the poem though. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
This is really strong even though it's a very short poem, and very well written. The lines there seem to be all that needs to be said, great job! Kittie |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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