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TrueLUV
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since 2000-07-19
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0 posted 2000-07-19 01:12 AM


Tell me why I can't see through your lies
My friends always tell me and parents have warned me
I didn't listen and now I am filled with sorrow and distrust
I need someone to hate, but I can only hate myself
Because Iam the one who let it go on for so long


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Jose Marti
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 374
washing DC
1 posted 2000-07-19 10:25 AM


It's so true, more power to ya man. You always have to watch out with them.
You're new here aren't you?

Crystalina123
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 228

2 posted 2000-07-19 11:46 AM


Yes girls can be very disappointing, after all we're human as well. I can identify with the feelings in this poem, even though I am not a guy. Scary thing is you sound exactly like my ex, so much so that I had to check your profile and compare E-mail addresses. Freaky!! LOL   Good poem though.

Love,
Crystal

When a door closes, another door of oppurtunity opens. The only problem is that most of us are so busy looking at the closed door that we fail to see

Alex Sankowich
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since 2000-07-17
Posts 28
North Carolina, USA
3 posted 2000-07-19 12:40 PM


Not all girls are disappointing, yo.  Just gotta find that special someone.  Good luck to ya.


--
"True love lasts forever."
"Heroes get remembered, but legends never die."



ashley cain
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since 2000-05-12
Posts 30
Texas
4 posted 2000-07-19 04:00 PM


Hey, I'm a girl, but I feel ya.  In the switch around, guys can dissapoint too. Great poem
Jenn Cirrincione
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5 posted 2000-07-19 07:05 PM


You know relationships all around suck... I know this, but the problem is guys can be just as dissapointing as girls. I wish I could say there is a dominant sex in this aspect, but I'm afraid not. I hope we all meet that "someone"
Jenn

Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
6 posted 2000-07-19 07:10 PM


Hey there, I know the feeling.  I am not a guy, but i know that we can get a little out of hand, but not all of us are that bad.  I hope that you find that special someone, because if you live without them you don't know what you are missing.  Just keep your head up.  I liked the poem though.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Kittie
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since 2000-07-08
Posts 103

7 posted 2000-07-19 08:01 PM


This is really strong even though it's a very short poem, and very well written.  The lines there seem to be all that needs to be said, great job!
Kittie



Artic Wind
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8 posted 2007-12-02 03:50 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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