Teen Poetry #3 |
Miracle |
Alex Sankowich Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 28North Carolina, USA |
I LOVE love poems, too, LoveBug, everyone. That's why I write them. They in my opinion are the most powerful, or either ones about hate. But I have no hate in my heart so I don't have a reason to write any...unless if they are about hate or against it, and not about feelings of hate. But umm...here's a poem I'm writing as of now...it may not be as good as my other ones, but these are feelings. "Miracles" It's never too hard to find the words Of how much I love you When I smile my feelings show You're a miracle, baby, just so you'll know Some people may think I'm a fool For loving you too much Some people say it's against the rules But miracles are rules in themselves And breaking your heart would be breaking a rule Therefore, baby, you're a miracle And I will not break your heart Some rules aren't meant to be broken And this is one of them Miracles are heaven And so are you But of all the miracles I know The best one is you saying "I love you" You are the one miracle that shows And when you say "I love you" Everybody knows Most times, you are so awesome And I do not know what to do But my miracle, Bristol, baby, I'm closing now And I want you to know I love you too -- True love lasts forever. Heroes get remembered, but legends never die. |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, I liked this poem too. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Phoebee Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42Peoria, AZ |
I love the poem. You express your feelings like no other. Keep up the good work. "Everything happens for a reason!" |
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Snickers Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 88East Haddam, CT |
I really like this. You express yourself quite well. ~<3 Alwayz~ **Nikki** ~*~*~*~*"We can complain because roses have thorns, or we can rejoice because thorns have roses." *~*~*~*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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