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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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I'm sorry I am not what you want me to be. I'm sorry I cannot help you. I'm sorry this is hurting you... I ache far more than you can imagine. I apologize for crushing your dreams... And for chaining your soul. I wish things could change, Somethings never will. I regret not being happier, And for not telling you what I wanted. I'm sorry that we cannot be friends, I wish we were less of enemies. Don't hate me, For I know not what I do. Please forgive me... I'm scared and confused. |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Jenn, I don't know what this is about, but never be sorry for being you. Beautiful poem. very heartfelt. Thank you for allowing us to read it. Thomas A. Plemmons "I could have missed the pain But I'd of had to miss The Dance" -Garth Brooks- |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well Jenn this is great i really enjoyed it. sorry i have not been on for a little while been writing a few books and packing. i'm moving in like two weeks my friend so please tell everyone i know that you know goodbye because i don't have most of their numbers. and thanks for shareing this with us. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Jenn listen your poem was beautiful, but your shouldn't change for any guy if what he wants was not you and he wanted you to change then it wasn't worth it stay strong  TrueLUV aka Kirill and iam a guy I wouldnt want anybody to change for me its so hypocritical > |
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HerMelness Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 37Bridgewater, NS, Canada |
This is undoubtedly one of my favorite poems from the forums. It is fabulous. It's so simply put, yet incredibly universal and meaningful. I love it! -Wherever you go, go with all your heart.- |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow! I haven't seen this one in a while! Thanks for the reply... I'm glad you liked it. Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Don't you wish people would just understand this sometimes?? Great words! "Don't hate me, For I know not what I do. Please forgive me... I'm scared and confused." |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jenn~ This was a really good piece by you...But I dont remember seeing it back then when you posted it...So sorry about being a little bit late...I honestly wouldnt want a guy to change for me...Even if he was the way I wanted him to be...That means that he would just be a fake or like my little puppet...I would want someone that is gonna be themselves...You know what I mean???And I have to agree with Thomas dont be sorry for being who you are...Be glad that you are who you are and not someone else...Not a fake!!!Thanks for sharing this!!! It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
You can't always be what someone else wants. At the time that I wrote this... I had felt like I wasn't trying hard enough... it wasn't like I wasn't the person he wanted me to be... it's just my emotional level never quite matched his, and I felt kinda bad. Now, looking back, he did try and rush me, and I can't change what I'm not ready for! Thanks for the reply! Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was cool, i liked it. keep it up!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thanks dopey... but I hope that wasn't one of those generic replies I keep hearing about. I'd seriously prefer no reply than a generic..."good work" Okay? But if it wasn't generic, thank you for the compliment. Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is one of the best one I've read of yours so far. You have this ability to show your inner most emotions thru your writing. keep it up and keep ya head up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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