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Never see forever end |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
I know this is not a forum for songs, but what is a song but poetry with music set to it. I'll not post many of these. Never see forever end She holds out her hand in the name of love He's given her something she can be sure of Breathless when she looks into his eyes Captured by the warmth in his smile In his smile He takes her hand and feels the love they share Never thought he'd find someone who really cared Caught up in the warmth of her smile Enraptured by the beauty in her eyes In her eyes Chorus: Cause he's been waiting For someone like her And she's been waiting For someone like him And if they just Hold each other's hand They will never see forever end (escalation) II Chorus: Yes, she's been witing For someone like him And he's been waitng For someone like her And forever They'll be together If they keep Holding each other's hands They will never see forever end Forever end No, they will never see forever end Thomas A. Plemmons Thank you for allowing me into your circle. I hope this doesn't overstep any bounds. "I could have missed the pain But I'd of had to miss The Dance" -Garth Brooks- |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Thomas such wonderful words and thoughts here! I love this and I think I am not alone wen I say that I don't mind the fact that it is a song! It is beautiful and creates wonderful imagery. Keep up the wonderful work and I truly do hope that some day you will be able to live out your dream because you definately have some talent here!  Best of Luck my friend; Love Always~*~Pryncess Jess~*~~*~My fire is dead,it knew no pain; yet it is dead and I remain: All stiff with ice ashes lie;and they are dead, and I will die~*~ |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
This was beautiful. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work. I love reading your poems and I am sure you didn't over step any boundaries. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Phoebee Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42Peoria, AZ |
WOW!! Please post more of these. If your goal was to touch hearts, you've done it. You'll go VERY far with your music. I'll buy every one of your CD's. Good Luck. "Everything happens for a reason!" |
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sorrowfulangel Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 59Memphis,TN |
i wouldn't mind reading more of your songs doll....this one was beatiful... "god is the biggest under-achiever I know,something good happens god is great,something bad happens,he now works in mysterious ways" |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
No boundaries overstepped here Thomas, for what is music without poetry ... and this was great poetry! Really wonderful ... had my imagination going as to what type of melody might play out in the background. Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
Beautiful song, Thomas. You know how much I love your work. I would love to see some more of your songs posted. I have always loved your songs. Your dream will come true some day. You sure do have a lot of fans here that love to read your poetry and now your songs. Love always, BabyGirl1 "We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other." -Luciano de Crescenzo- |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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