Teen Poetry #3 |
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by popular demand...(again, plez guess) |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
it is the point of life around this all else rotates but there are some who dont know this so with them we must debate we, the poets, are best suited best fitted to putting this down on page it is one of the few things that all poets share, no matter the age it gives the best high on earth and can last for a lifetime without end but when its gone it leaves a void that is the hardest of all to mend it is a dangerous game we play that depends on not luck or skill and although these things might get it started to win takes detirmination and power of will you need not yearn for it it will come in its own time when you are ready for it then it will make your life sublime it has great power some say some say it can slow time and the first time it finds you you will cross some imaginary line the first time changes people permantly alters their view of life it can show people things never seen things like pain and suffereing and strife it is the most powerful force it can do things nothing else can it can change life and death and has control over every human what is it? plez post ur guesses, or comments, and email me for the awnser thanks everybody! CLBinLOVE always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :) |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
you have a gift for writing enigmas in rhymes! i have one guess and i wasn't too sure of it until i reread the 2nd stanza... my guess: love We all got our demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
man do you know how to turn a poem into a riddle...well i have to agree with ethan...i also think that the answer is love...if not ooh well at least i tried... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
At first I was thinking inspiration, but then I got to the end and well....duh....love. Great riddle. I've got one that I'm not sure if I posted yet. If I haven't , I will. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It's gotta be "LOVE" |
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Linzi Junior Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 35Pennsylvania, USA |
I'm gonna have to agree..I was thinking love too (but that seems too easy, so i'm not 100% sure) ~*~Linzi~*~ "Ignore reality; there's nothing you can do about it" ~ Natalie Imbruglia |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Well I was way off on the last one that you put out here so I'm just going to go with everybody else and say love. By the way you got my vote on this one. I think its quite cool what you do. jason ![]() |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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