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the real me (please respond) |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
The Real Me I’ve changed so much I cant tell whats real My weight, my face, and such They all have changed For the good I don’t know why I cant see what I should Who am I? I just cant see What people say Is the real me Its hard to think that im thin Not what used to be My mind cant seem to win I always thought I was very ugly But they all say im hot I don’t get it I just cant understand What they see In this young man well, first id like to say that i didnt write this, my best friend did and im posting it for him thx everyone |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This is a great poem, tell your friend he has a great talent.  I surely can relate with some parts, but you know what, I have decided that I am not going to care what the world thinks of me anymore, it's the only true way you can be happy! Keep up the good stuff. Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
well you need to tell your friend that this was a really good poem...but we all change as we grow up...i know i have changed alot...and too quickly... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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