Teen Poetry #3 |
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thoughts of you |
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buttercup411 Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 41miami, fl, u.s |
as i retrace steps back to our days i wonder what it is of you today... little boy hiding behind a face a face making up for a life of hurt and pain.. you dragged me into your world with no words i knew you loved... that you loved that girl... the one who broke your world.... who took your feelings never thought of what you needed i tried to rescue you from the hole you had been in... just to realize i knew not what words to say.. and besides it was too late... i madly feel for you my first everything i gave to you.. people say i should reggret it.. but how can i regret of you? one kiss i gave to you, my innocence i gave to you as i sit here today i wonder.. wonder of you and i wish i could have told you told you how much love i had for you. !@$^^*&_+"?~~#+*"^%!~"><+*&%$ this one is for my first love.. thanks for reading, love.... buttercup |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
well buttercup this is something i can relate to you with...except my first love played me for a fool...he always told me he loved me...until one day i found out everything he said to me was a lie...keep your head up theres no point in living in your past... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Great poem buttercup. You should't regret it. It's an important milestone in one's life. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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