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buttercup411
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since 2000-07-03
Posts 41
miami, fl, u.s

0 posted 2000-07-09 05:18 PM




  as i retrace steps back to our days
i wonder what it is of you today...

little boy hiding behind a face
a face making up for a life of hurt and pain..

you dragged me into your world
with no words i knew  you loved...
that you loved that girl...
the one who broke your world....
who took your feelings
never thought of what you needed

i tried to rescue you from the hole you had been in...

just to realize i knew not what words to say..
and besides it was too late...

i madly feel for you
my first everything i gave to you..
people say i should reggret it..
but how can i regret of you?

one kiss i gave to you,
my innocence i gave to you

as i sit here today i wonder..
wonder of you
and i wish i could have told you
told you how much love i had for you.

!@$^^*&_+"?~~#+*"^%!~"><+*&%$

this one is for my first love..



thanks for reading,
love....
buttercup



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Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-07-09 05:26 PM


well buttercup this is something i can relate to you with...except my first love played me for a fool...he always told me he loved me...until one day i found out everything he said to me was a lie...keep your head up theres no point in living in your past...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Jose Marti
Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374
washing DC
2 posted 2000-07-09 10:41 PM


Great poem buttercup. You should't regret it. It's an important milestone in one's life.
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-12-01 10:49 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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