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The One
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The One |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
The One I saw you in my dreams I know you saw me too I hear your voice You are talking to me I hear you whisper I know your the one I have been waiting all my life You have been here forever I just see you now I know your the one Its too late, you have found someone new What should I do? I know I need you Your the one I love you forever Your my new security I know I am happy when your here What have I done? Your the one I feel your kiss I soon wake up to find you near I know now Your the one "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
The poem was exelent. You're so sweet. I like how the poem ends. I hope you'll be with this guy soon. |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Jose, thanx for reading my poem. I am glad that you enjoyed it. I hope to read more of your poems. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
Sis, you know what i'm gna say, but.. here's another thought- I REALLY LIKE IT!! I didn't really think you would write stuff like this (no offense) but it's in you, and I'm glad you're into writing like me! Kittie, aka, Sis |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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