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Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

0 posted 2000-07-04 08:39 PM

Why did God do this?
Why did he take you away from me?

I cant believe this happened,
you didnt even say good~bye.
That what mostly,
made me start to cry.

I didnt want you to go,
you left me way to soon.
Now when I think of you,
I look up at the moon.

I love you,
and forever I will.
Just answer me this,
why did you have to get killed?

You shouldnt have played with fire,
knowing that you would get burned.
And since you were murdered,
this is a lesson I have learned.

R.I.P~~Orlando Meraz
12~22~80~~12~31~98

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

1 posted 2000-07-04 11:11 PM

Erin- I am sooo sorry that you had to go through with the pain of losing someone you love! It was a very good peom, although very sad. Keep your chin up, things will get better!!
Bel

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

2 posted 2000-07-05 12:15 PM

Erin, I really am having a hard time finding the words to express what I feel for you right now. I've never lost a loved one so close in age. I just pray that the healing has been a good process for you..

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

3 posted 2000-07-05 04:28 PM

well i've read poems about him a few times so you know how i feel. this is a great poem and i hope you do keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2000-07-05 07:58 PM

I'm so sorry for your loss Erin ... this must have been a very special person in your life to have expressed your emotions so beautifully in this poem.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Jacman
Member

since 2000-06-27

Posts 291
Dwight Il, US

5 posted 2000-07-06 08:46 PM

I am so sorry you had to feel such a loss. You expressed yourself very well in this poem. I hope that you heal quickly from your pain.

jason

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

6 posted 2000-07-07 07:52 PM

I know how you feel. I lost one of my friends the last fourth of July. I hope that your heart will begin to heal. I know it will never be the same, but you have to try. Just keep your head up.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2007-12-01 10:39 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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