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To all those who have ever blamed themselves
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To all those who have ever blamed themselves |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Be still my quiet little heart Eventually these storm clouds will part Soon, the sun will come flashin out And your happiness will spread about Never again will you feel ashamed And you shall not be blamed You have done nothing wrong Please sing your beatiful song Before, nothing else mattered But never again will your dreams be shattered Open your eyes, my beautiful child And see that you are allowed to be wild Now can you see? You are finally free!! ~*~This is to anyone who has ever blamed themselves for something! the only place you will find freedom is through happiness, and the onlt place to find happiness is through forgiveness~*~ ~*~My fire is dead,it knew no pain; yet it is dead and I remain: All stiff with ice ashes lie;and they are dead, and I will die~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
you should start submitting your poems for the book...cuz they are qutie good...this is the truth...they only way to forgive is through happiness...but not with me and my best friend...something bad happened and thats how we started to talk again...keep up the good work and start submitting it... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
^ LOOK I WAS THE FIRST REPLY TO YOURS!!!!!!!!!!OHH AND THE SECOND ONE....i feel so special now....haha< !signature--> ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 07-04-2000).] |
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**AANGELLE** Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 45 |
I really loved this poem.I agree that blaming yourself can really tear you up inside. well done |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Jess...it seems like you're getting better everyday lately. I'm really proud of you. You've always been good...but now it seems like you're exploring another level. Just let the depictions inside you flow. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Jess, very true. This is something that alot of people need to learn. Blaming ones self for something out of they're own power is redundant and it only will hurt them. The only time you should blame yourself is when it really is your falt. Very nice piece keep them coming, and please, feel loved. jason I had to edit this because i am a retard and can't spell my own name.. [This message has been edited by Jacman (edited 07-04-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent StarPryncess! Such a postive wonderful flow to this poem. I love the message you portray here! Applause!!! Very well done, best wishes, /Kit |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
I like this poem. It's very positive. You are a great writer. Blaming oneslf is self-destructive |
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buttercup411 Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 41miami, fl, u.s |
this is a very pretty poem... is actually really uplifting it made me feel a little better... you should really enter it for the book thing |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful piece. True, you can only find peace when you forgive yourself... "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey Jess, Great poem. I enjoyed it very much, it seemed to have a more positve vibe to it, and I liked it. Keep it up. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
How very true it is, that harboring resentment towards yourself only brings undeserved heart-ache and storm clouds. I admit that I've struggled with guilt over situations beyond my control several times, and those times have been the darkest and most depressing times of my life. I love your poem, it is a lesson we should all learn. Thank you! *~Meredith~* I am none but the angel Who sings you to sleep As you pray to God Your soul to keep *Me |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
I really like this poem and can really, really relate. Great advice too  !~Susie "Do you love me because I am beautiful, or am I beautiful because you love me?" ~Cinderella |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I'm very impressed! This is beautiful, well written, and with such a great message! We can all indeed relate.  Keep up the phenomenal work! *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This time, I think you deserve a standing ovation. Your poems are getting better and better. I guess talent in writing is born in a person, and you have it. Keep writing cause I wanna keep reading them. |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Jess, Beautiful, beautiful work! Loved every line. There is hope in ourselves, if we reach down far enough. Glad you are finding the better sides of existence. Happiness lies within. Thomas |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This is a lovely poem, and so true. It's one of the most important lessons, and the hardest. I for one has failed this test many times. One can forgive, but it is hard to forget. Absolutely fantastic poem, and I think you should think about submitting it for the book, it is great Keep it up! Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This i didn't miss. But I'm bumping it ~*bump*~ cause i think the new members should read this. This poem is one of the best ones I've read in passions and I think the new members will benefit in reading this poem. Great message to spread to all As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
forgiveness is a very good theme that many of us tend to leave out of our lives. good read. keep up the great work. Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Acire < !signature-->what a sweetheart you are! I agree it is something that needs to be understood. and thank you kindly for the *bump* hehe Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-24-2000).] |
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