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Greeneyes617
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0 posted 2001-01-08 04:45 PM


Ok. First I put the topic/subject as "Friendly Poem" because this it a poem my bestest friend and I wrote together....It goes like this.....


Sun kissed moon
Fairies with wings
Majestic nights
Birds that sing
Sparkling ocean
Soft white sand
Burning candles
Hand in hand
Gentle kiss
Quite midnights stroll
Hearts fulfilled
Our love untold





Ugh.....me and my typos...LOL!  

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes617 (edited 01-08-2001).]

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IsGona
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1 posted 2001-01-08 04:52 PM


Very pleasant imageray... You brightened my day
Thx
Jason

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

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2 posted 2001-01-08 07:44 PM


This was such a positive poem. I liked this one a lot. Made me smile.


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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3 posted 2001-01-08 11:49 PM


Writing with another person is always fun.  Maybe we should all write one big poem some day?  "The Greatest Poem of All Time..." a congregation of all of our abilities.
Lakewalker
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4 posted 2001-01-09 02:04 PM


This is such a good poem, tell your friend that I like it   

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sweetstuff101
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5 posted 2001-01-09 06:18 PM


that was great!! I love it!! Very well written too! Keep up the great work!

Luv Always,  
  ~*~SweetStuff~*~


How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it????


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6 posted 2001-01-12 09:53 AM


Awww hehehe this poem was so cute!    
Suga_Baby
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7 posted 2001-01-12 10:08 PM


This is the CUTEST!! Great work   I love it!
Pixie-Babe03
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8 posted 2001-01-13 04:51 PM


Beautiful   i loooove love love it!!  
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