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To My Dear Lover...
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To My Dear Lover... |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
To My Dear Lover... You were here and it was grand, But things were getting out of hand. You wanted from me things, That I'm not yet willing to give you. Things are not straight up and down, We have lots to sort out you silly clown. I deny not that I love you soo much, To jepordise this just push me more... We need to talk about what the future holds, Is it love that you want all covered in gold, Or are you willing to accept me and all I possess? I won't offer you the world, money or gold, But I will give you my heart Which is more precious than any gold. Take care of it as I have done, Never move it, lose it or break it, For it will shatter into a million peices And I will never be the same again... Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yea i know how that is. Being afraid of being hurt is hell, but you'd never know if he'd hurt you or not unless you entrust him. Good luck.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
seems like your a little scared of what might happen if he loves you... that what I got from it.. the poem was good overall, keep writing best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Dopey, I can see what you are saying, but I don't know if I want to be more than a friend... it is difficult, I have lost one friend recently to this sort of thing... I just don't want it to happen again... Jeremy... you are probably right that I am scared of letting him love me... but as i say, it is difficult... I just don't know!! Thanks guys for your advice, I will use it to my advantage... Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I have sympathy for your situation, but I am glad that it is motivating you to write so much and so well. Don't stop writing, and more importantly sharing them with us! |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
I agree with Jeremy. It sounds like you're a little afraid of this love. Give things a try, it doesn't have to be love right away. Don't give up on love, it's out there, trust me I am still looking and have had my fair share of chances to give up. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Like it says in your poem, you need to talk about things. I hope everything goes as you want  Oh, and nice job on the poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
you sound so much like me.. i have been pushing and potential seriousness away since i got hurt... it is the wiorst feeling.. btu life is full of ups and downs and you have to enjoy the ups while they are there good luck Melz! |
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