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buttercup411 Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 41miami, fl, u.s |
sorrow felt in my heart tears anxiously waitning to drip down my cheeks....... why? because of you right? you would think it was you who did this well not... i'm not crying because of you, i'm crying because i've hurt myself, i let myself down, i had made a promise i gave myself my own word, not to be blinded fooled be love... and what is it i go do? i go and let myself get hurt... open my bubble and let someone in... and what happens? i let the take it from me... once again i let someone get to me after all that work .. the pain the struggle to make myself invisible to others i feel like i'm out in the open ...........no where to run.............. now there's nothing to do but cry and ask myself why me? *~&#`~*+~@*^~"+*~@$*^~~~***** this is my first post i hope you guys like it... thanks for reading, love.... buttercup |
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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
I really enjoyed this poem. It reminds me of what I had gone through with an ex-boyfriend of mine. You really put down on paper exactly how I felt. I lost myself in the relationship and felt exactly like that. You just have to keep your head up and smile and things get better. Great poem, and keep up the good work! |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Just wanting to let you know that for a first post, you did a great job. It's so true that sometimes we are our own worst enemy. But remember, just as only you can let yourself down, it's only you that can bring yourself back up again. TAP2 |
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buttercup411 Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 41miami, fl, u.s |
thank you guys.... thanks for reading, love.... buttercup |
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Snickers Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 88East Haddam, CT |
This is beautiful, and so heartfelt. I wouldn't bash myself for this, b/c in order to find your soulmate you're going to have to go through ppl that aren't meant for you. And you're gonna hafta go thru pain before you find true love. So hang in there, and please don't give up on love! Welcome to Passions! ~<3 Alwayz~ **Nikki** ~*~*~*~*"We can complain because roses have thorns, or we can rejoice because thorns have roses." *~*~*~*~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Buttercup! This is a wonderful first post ... so full of emotion! Check your e-mail shortly for a special message! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I sometimes wish that all guys would read poems written by girls. Maybe this would help guys understand girls more. And if us guys don't get HIT IN THE FACE with poems like this, there must be something wrong with us. This poem is so heartfelt it's really beautiful. I'm sorry that you had to go thru all this. Be strong |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
welcome to passions...i hope that you enjoy it here...well this is a beautiful poem...but what can we do...were going through some of the consequences of life...move on with your life...theres no point in living in your past... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Indeed Buttercup, I wonderful first post!! I am in this exact situation. As a matter of fact, that is the reason I am crying right now, but sshhhh don't tell anyone! hehee. anywho,I'm sorry for the pain you are dealing with!! Just remember one thing,--Time in it's own essence can heal even the deepest of wounds-Including the heart! Keep your head up my friend and you'll do just fine!!Best of luck loved the format of the poem too!! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ p.s. Welcome to passions! ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Ask yourself this...was it fun while it lasted? Ask yourself this...was my heart with him? Ask yourself this...did I know he would do this? Ask yourself this one last question...was I aware that there would be a chance of getting hurt? I'm not trying to bash on your feeling about what happened, I just wanna help you into a better state of mind. If you answered yes to all of these questions, it means nothing more than the fact that you're human and you let your heart be free. If you deny your heart, you deny that which makes you human. Hanging onto the edge will never get you hurt. Falling can be so much more fun. Jeremy< !signature--> "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." [This message has been edited by Jeremy Halstead (edited 07-05-2000).] |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
welcome to this place. i hope you like it here alot. i really enjoyed this poem its very good and i hope to see more from you so do keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Welcome to passions, I very much did like your poem, the way you wrote it made it seem like you were out in the open. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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