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Author Unknown
Member

since 2001-01-05

Posts 57
Linn MO USA

0 posted 2001-01-05 04:55 PM

As I look into the eyes of my sister Kay,
I listen to what she has to say.
She speaks in words of sweet emotion,
Full of love and such devotin.
Her voice sinks into my head,
Makes me wonder why I fled.
To a life I never knew,
Please tell me Kay what do I do?
She tells me how much she loves me,
Tries to make me see.
Awlays calm and loving,
Ignores all the pushing and shoving.
In my heart she does stay,
On my mind she does weigh.
Every night she kneels to pray,
That I'll have a good life some day.
Listening to her words I begin to smile,
Wondering why she finds me worth while.
Kiss her on her cheek,
Her heart is strong not weak.
One smile could kill my pain,
Each night my heart does strain.
Gazing into her eyes,
Happy she tells me no lies.
As I look into the eyes of my sister Kay,
I loo at her to say.
I'll be there for you if ever comes the day.
Tell her I love her,
When my life crashes like thunder,
Thinking of the best way,
To repay my sister Kay.
Couldn't think of how,
All I can say is "WOW!"
So I wrote this for you,
It's the best I can do.
Some day I'll be abel to give you money,
Just because you're sweet like honey.
As I sit here writting, disappointed and crying,
Crying because this is the best way i know to repay
My Baby Sister Kay.

keoni
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since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

1 posted 2001-01-05 05:23 PM

Welcome to Passions. Nice first poem. Your sister obviously means alot to you. Hope to see more in the future.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

LoveAll
Member

since 2000-05-24

Posts 148
B'dale, USA

2 posted 2001-01-05 05:53 PM

This is so beautiful! Little children are so amazing sometimes...and so special! They are truely a gift from God. I'm happy that you took the time to notice Kay's joy in life, and I hope you find that simplicity in yours.
God Bless and Keep Smiling

Those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint. Isaiah 40:3

Author Unknown
Member

since 2001-01-05

Posts 57
Linn MO USA

3 posted 2001-01-05 06:09 PM

yeah shes special to me....lol loveall shes not really a baby just my younger sis shes 16...sorry bout that

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Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2001-01-05 06:37 PM

Welcome to Passions

Yeah, even though we're poets and we should know better, sometimes we still take things too literaly in writing, I was seeing a little kid too. oh well

You did a really good job of writing this one, it's a great first post. I hope to see you around more

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2001-01-05 06:39 PM

This is a wonderful tribute to your sister Author Unknown! Welcome to Passions!

A gift of words as sweet as this to a loved one, is the best gift of all ... I'm sure she will treasure it, you are both so very fortunate to have each other.

Welcome again, and I hope to read more!

(PS ... check your e-mail shortly)

Best wishes,
/Kit

Author Unknown
Member

since 2001-01-05

Posts 57
Linn MO USA

6 posted 2001-01-05 06:45 PM

thanks yall, she means the world to me shes been there for me all her life and most of mine and ive always wanted to repay her and this is a lame way i know but its the best i can do at the moment

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-01-05 09:58 PM

Beautiful tribute to a wonderful sister. It's nice to see that you're so close. Great poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-01-06 12:23 PM

first of all, WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

A beautiful tribute to you sister indeed. And i have to disagree with you when you say that this is a lame way to repay her. It sure isn't. You have to remember that this is your feelings penned down on a piece of paper. A reminder of your feelings for her. I don't think you'd consider that as lame now would you. Thanks for the wonderful read. keep sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Melster
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since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

9 posted 2001-01-06 02:23 AM

Great peice, wolcome to passions!!

Melz!!

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

10 posted 2001-01-06 04:32 PM

A wonderful tribute to your sister. I think this is a great way to show your apreciation of her. I'm sure she loved it. I feel the same way about my lil bro, and I know the feeling that know matter what you do you always want to do so much more for them. He means the world to me and I can see your lil sister does to you. That's really great...
Nice poem.
Welcome to passions
Jason

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

11 posted 2001-01-07 03:30 PM

Greeting to the world of Passions

wonderful first post
you really showed the respect and love in this poem
i hope to continue to read your work

~JDR

"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

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