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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
this is about people who pretend to be holy and act holier than thou but really they act petty and pathetic and sin worse than anyone else because they cant even admit it although they point out faults in others you make me feel sinful with all your quoted scriptures but they only matter in your mind because theyre meaningless to your heart you pretend to be holy preach one way and act another interpret the bible your own way but take other parts too literal both to back up your wrong opinions you can take your religion do whatever you want with it but keep it away from me i dont want it i may be a sinner but i admit it you are one too just hiding behind a facade you think your holier than thou that your **** doesnt stink you lie and spread rumors like it barely counts as sin then preach about evil teen sex and how horrible it is but all sins are equal so dont judge others unless first you judge yourself Its better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you are not |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
good points here cant wait to read more best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
I liked this one...I know what you mean about people judging other people so fast. I loved the last line, it was a really good way of ending the poem. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
ouch!i agree! ppl who are like that suck! good poem though,veery good Regina |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
ouch!i agree! ppl who are like that suck! good poem though,veery good Regina |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow. I wish more Christians could read that. That was painful... I used to be like that (no more, though! I smartened up!). Now I'm sick of my fellow Christians who are like that. Makes me want to throw up. ~*Rhonda "I am Canadian" - Joe If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. All this goes back to the reformation........you've express this well.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
You make a good point here that people like this need to realize their own faults too. Good job of expressing this! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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