Teen Poetry #3 |
What I dream about |
Neokrew Member
since 2000-12-24
Posts 60VA |
What I dream about It seems you were sent from above Everything about you perfect in my eyes I live for this never ending love My heart beats for only you With every breath I take I’m wanting you there with me I want to sit you down by the lake And explain just how I feel I would never wish for our hearts to part For that alone would be worse than death This love which is beyond any known words Your what I dream about. (For Robin) --Neo [This message has been edited by Neokrew (edited 01-02-2001).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I love the feelings you share in this and the poem is written well, nice job "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
thsi poem is so cute great expression! i look forward to more of your posts |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
This is so cute! I hope that someday someone writes something like this for me! Great work! [This message has been edited by Suga_Baby (edited 01-02-2001).] |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful tribute to your loved one. I'm glad that you feel this way for someone, and you describe it very well. Thanks for posting! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
This is so sweet! I really loved it. If a guy gave this to me I would just melt. It flowed really well, and the message was really sweet. Hope everything's going well. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
great post beatiful words i loved the dreamlike atmophere and deliverance of your words best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. LOve poems are nice to read, and i hope things work out for you. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
I did NOT know you could write like this! This was incredible! I LOVED it! I liked the way it flowed.. wow.. I agree with DreamerGrl27. If a guy ever gave something like this to me, I would melt! Awesome job.. and I cant wait to read more from you.. soon, right? Wonderful poem, I loved reading it. *Jennifer |
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Neokrew Member
since 2000-12-24
Posts 60VA |
Hey, Thank you all for your kind replies. I don't feel as if I am 1/2 the poet most of you are so I really don't post as much as I should ( I really don't write as much as I should eather) I really want to thank you for the time you take to read my poems. It is really nice to come online and know that I will have a reply to my poem and someone has liked it. Your Fellow Netpoet --Neo |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This poem is so sweet! Your an excellent poet. Keep em coming! |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nicely done. I truly enjoyed this. Please keep posting more. |
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