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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2000-12-29 01:38 AM

I turn my head,
To look into you heart warming eyes.
Something hits me out of nowhere,
Something i never realized.
I always knew that you cared,
And you were one of a kind.
But i never thought you were one,
To read deep into my mind.
I felt as though i was someone,
Who played an important role in your life.
But even with my importance,
The way i felt just wasnt right.
I didnt feel very needed,
Wanted or loved or desired.
I just felt like your feelings for me,
Have given up and retired.
But then you looked at me,
With all the care in the world.
With two caring eyes,
You made the day of a sad gurl.
You showed me how much you care,
No words need to be said.
I guess i just had to read between the lines,
Of the story of your heart i never read.

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

1 posted 2000-12-29 10:22 AM

It's wonderful to see caring in another's eyes. You describe it beautifully. Thank you for sharing this with us.

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav

tq_99
Junior Member

since 2000-11-14

Posts 45
Las Vegas, NM, US

2 posted 2000-12-29 10:49 AM

Wow. Talk bout a great poem Great job, I liked it a lot. It flowed great too. Keep up the great work. God Bless,

- tq_99

"Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing"

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

3 posted 2000-12-29 11:32 AM

Great poem, I wish I could find something like that.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

4 posted 2000-12-29 01:04 PM

great poem as usual

I'm gonna start callin u Michi Michi just cause its cute

lol k neways...this was so good, especially the last 2 lines ..im so jealous!~! lol
talk to you later grl

*dq

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2000-12-29 01:27 PM

If i was the guy you wrote this for, I'd marry you right now

This is sooooooo sweet. thanks for sharing it

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

6 posted 2000-12-29 01:51 PM

this was very sincere and nice. he sounds very special to you.

~JDR

"A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

7 posted 2000-12-29 04:33 PM

I like the flow of this, the poem is very good. I think you expressed your feelings excellently

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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2000-12-29 05:59 PM

You are such a talented love poem writer. I liked this one a lot.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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