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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
We are unwilling participants in a comedy. We are a melodrama constantly unfolding. If you dont believe me and swear that you wont conform. You need to know that its true, otherwise the best joke is on you. We die young, scream loud... and people laugh. Empty Vast Beautiful Young Hatred Teenage Melodramas are all we have.... Adore the frustration sheep. I am one of you, but with eyes. "The biggest ocean can not stop a man from drowning" - Paul Watley |
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peanogrl83 Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 202 |
Nice job here! Very provocative subject matter...well, at least for me. I've often argued the paradox of conformism ...how does one go agianst the grain of conformational society without conforming to a routine of individualistic non-conformation? Is this not setting yourself into a mold in of itself? I'll stop now, lest I go on for hours... lol. In any event, nice job! Vreni p.s. Adore the frustration sheep. I am one of you, but with eyes This sight is a gift, but many in it's possession consider it a curse of sorts. For life would be easier for those who "see" if they were "blind"......but once one may see, would one ever want to give it up? Okay, yah, time to shut up.. lol :.) |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
I am a lot confused by this poem... and peanogrl - you confused me even more... I think I will go and find a dictionary and come back and re-read it after I igure out wha all the words mean!! Good Job though... It ain't easy to confuse me!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I love this poem Paul...I really do. It's of much spiffy-ness. You always say it so well. Take advantage of your gift...don't let it decay. Paul I like cheese too.  In order to be good one must know evil. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Wow. I've got a lot to think about now...amazing job. ~Carly WhY ShOuLd I Be hypnotized by someone else's lies WhY ShOuLd I Take time and pride in what someone else believes... |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great job with this, you should post some more here for us to read. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
WOW! This was simply amazing. Simply! The whole poem is great and i loved every word of it. Wowowowowow........this is great. I am surprised you don't get on here more. We are all missing out as a community with the lack of your artistic postings.....You HAVE to come on here more. This one poem was amazing, I can't wait to read more.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I agree 100 percent with peanogrl83 and Dopes on this piece. And peanogrl, geez...you never stop amazing me  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
Its hard to appreciate the things that kill you, so i dont consider any of this much of anything... but i guess thats artistic too right? To me an artist is no more than an interpreter, i see the world around me... and yeah, hell i dont know... ill write something about it... "The biggest ocean can not stop a man from drowning" - Paul Watley |
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