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Wingless Angel
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI 
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Wingless angel doth tear at your heart Ripping the dreams of your damp mind apart Wish you hadn't fallen for her bloody tears Instead, you feed fire of darkness and fears A perfectionist's day has been blown by her past Tricked brainwaves to thinking that smiles would last Help fight her reality, nightmare at a time She's stuck in a box, a suffocating mime Screaming and beating, her flesh nearly dead Wandering pupils; sight blinded instead Laughter of halo's been lost within death All for a bitter and and lifeless, deep breath |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Poor angel........i love you carlyyyy...this was great!!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Wow.. this is a really powerful piece, with great imagery and deep emotions. Thank you for sharing it with us. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
As you would say... This poem kixxxx. Great expression and powerful words. You rock IsGona< !signature--> "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ [This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 12-24-2000).] |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Wow~ this was great. really liked it..keep it up *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Many thanks to all of you  ~Carly WhY ShOuLd I Be hypnotized by someone else's lies WhY ShOuLd I Take time and pride in what someone else believes... |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
wow!thats all im gonna say. Regina |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Your words seemed very strong in this one, nice job "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
bravo!!!! stands up and gives a standing ovation bravo!!!! I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Heh heh...thanks acire!!! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
your amazing, i hope to read more very soon! its just simply inspirational! ~JDR "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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