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A dad.. |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
A dad cares for you right when your born they never stop loving you you love them too then one day they notice that your different you get surgeries and you don't know what your doing he stays with you in the hospital. But one day your dad has cancer he gets surgeries you are scared he loses his hair you see him cry like you did when you were in pain. He takes care of you one day you have another surgery and you body can't take it your body gets worse he stays with you. After you go home your in pain he tells you calm down hunny it's okay he stays up with you all night cares for you he tells you I love you. A few years later he's getting weaker cause of his cancer and he is slowly dying you don't know what to do other than cry he talks to you. He takes you out to the mall lets you have freedom like everyone else in the world he treats you like you don't have a disability you say Daddy I love you. One night he ends up in the hospital you visit him every day then you know he's dying soon you spend all your time in the hospital. You wonder what your boyfriends doing but you want to stay with your dad until you and family are ready to go home you say "I love you" he says the same. The next day you find out he died of cancer you cry want him back. Everyone tells you he loves you cares about you and you'll always be his little special girl. With love, ~*~Minna~*~ RIP Mikko Talviharju 2-21-43 to 12-23-99 |
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David Generous Junior Member
since 2000-12-15
Posts 13 |
Hi Min, Your written is very good, I loved what you wrote about your dad, he's a great guy and I wish I met him. I love the poem though its sweet about how you were there for eachother no matter what,thats a true daughter and father sticking together. Your poem was from the heart made me feel like crying ..... Good poem though your Dad loves it too I bet...... Dave |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Pretty Girly: This poem was really heart-felt! It made me cry...my mom passed away from a heart attack so I know how it feels to lose. Luckily unlike you Im healthy. Im sorry to hear you have Cancer...hope everything turns out ok. Take care and God bless. So sweet how you helped each other.  ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Your relationship with your father was and still is, very special Minna ... he must have been a wonderful man. Your memories describe a very caring and loving father ... hugs to you at this difficult time of remembrance. Best wishes, /Kit |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is such a sad and touching piece, my friend. It had to be hard to lose your father, but you still have his love to carry with you. I'm sure he's looking down on you and is proud of what you have done. This is a beautiful tribute. Thank you for sharing it with us. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
David- Thanks for talking with me SwEeTnSeXy18 I don't have cancer, I have a unknown disability. Kit& Love Bug- Today has been a day that he's gone into a better world |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. I hope all is well Minna! Keep writing!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
You know what I have said so I will just remind you again! He is always there and will always love you, keep him in your heart and remember his memory!! Love Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Antother excellent one Minna!! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Minna, all i could offer are words of comfort. Everything in time will help your although it will never disappear. great work on this!your father seemed to be an amazing man. Regina |
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