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My Explanation To You
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My Explanation To You |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Hi all - I wrote this one last night on what I think is going to happen on Friday when Michael returns... I don't know what to do still... I am just sitting here waiting now!! ~~My Explanation~~ I reach out and grab your shoulder As you walk away from me... Please just let me explain. I have never stopped loving you, But when you left to follow your dreams I thought that was the end... I knew I'd see you again, I just never knew when, I kept busy putting memories away, Trying to hide how I really felt. I tried to hide the painful past from What I hoped was a perfect future. You are always a tomorrow away And I feel that every chance we have Is caught on something else, Something that stops us from being together. I wish things weren't like this... That hurdles weren't in our way, It's like were not meant to be together, Like someones pulling us apart. I wish I could be with you, I don't understand my predicament And I don't think that it will last, I want to be with you, Like I have for soo long now, I want to be the one you'll love Untill the end of time, Please can I be that one... Can you love me ever this way? Im sorry that I hurt you, I never knew where I was to stand, I will always love you, Like I have for all this time! Michael - I will always be here for you... Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I can really feel the pain and confusion in this piece. I hope that everything works out for the best. Keep up the good work! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
This poem was really good...it had a lot of emotion it in and you expressed everything really well. I really hope it all works out for you. I loved the line "You're always a tomorrow away," and this part: I want to be the one you'll love Untill the end of time |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Who knows what will happen though, right? Nice job of writing the poem, it is good! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
nice poem and good luck  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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