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A Woman Alone
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A Woman Alone |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
A woman alone, Yet surrounded by people. A woman yearns to live, But wants to give in. Her soul cries for peace, Her mind pleads for silence, Her body begs for relief. She needs to fight, But she only knows how to survive. Her broken heart is empty. There's a loss of control, But yet too much control. A woman alone, With her silent struggle, Too afraid to allow anyone in. No one seems strong enough, To tear down the walls. Locked in an endless battle, With her body and mind. A woman alone, Will search for the light, And escape the darkness. *Jennifer |
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Andrea4writes Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 31Fayetteville, NC USA |
omg i really liked that but it also makes me think keep up the good work.. did you read the post with your name one it ???? <3Andrea ~luvs~ Anthony,<3 You only live once so live it to the fullest.. Love comes and goes but friends stay for ever~!~!~!~!~! |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Hey. Thanks  I work hard on my poetry, and I hope others realize that and appreciate it. Yeah I read the post. *Jennifer |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I like this poem. I realized that it said that this woman has nobody and won't let anyone in, YET nobody is strong enough to tear down the walls. I think that's kinda sad. Anyway good poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Dazed_and_Confused Junior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 15 |
When I read your poem I thought about the lady and the silent struggle visualy in my head and it is so unbeliveably real. I feel like that sometimes too. I love this poem. Keep up the good work! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great job of describing this!! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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