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vix616 Junior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 22 |
Words we all speak, things we all see, so why's love so weak when it comes to me? Maybe someone'll come someday, someone who likes me too. I've done everything, even pray for the small words 'i love you' What if i'm alone, always and forever. I just wish right now, I could be together.. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Vix616! This is a very tender and thought-provoking first post. I think many of us have felt this way at one time or another ... and I believe that when you're least expecting it ... "someday" you will find that "someone".  I hope to read more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (check your e-mail for a special message) Best wishes, /Kit |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Hi Vicky! Welcome to Passions, this place is great! We are a little online family, and you get to know some people with time.  Well, I liked your first poem, and believe me I know how you feel. I've been feeling like this for about 17 years. Well, I hope you enjoy Teens, and message me anytime you need someone. Your friend, Caz It's been raining since you left me. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! I can relate to this piece very well. The thing that keeps me going is dreaming of that "somebody". He'll come to me someday, and I'm sure that person will come to you, too. Keep up the good work! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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vix616 Junior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 22 |
Kit,Caz and Lovebug - thanx for all making me feel welcome to the forum and for all your compliments about my poem..im always working on more.. luv Vicki |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Welcome to Passions! You'll love it here and I hope to see more of your poetry...it's good! ~Writing is filling up your soul with words~ --Me |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions I love your first stanza, it's a great start for this great poem. I don't know why I like it so much, but I do I hope you enjoy it here "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! I think you are a very talented writer. You flow very well within your poetry! Looking forward to more!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Aww hun im POSITIVE that there will be someone who will feel the same exact way you do about them in the near future. You just need to give these kinda things time...i truely believe there is someone out there for everyone...especially you =o) Cant wait to see more from you!! |
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