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tq_99 Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 45Las Vegas, NM, US |
I wrote this poem in relation to what I'm going through right now, I've lost my best friend, she never talks anymore, I'm messing up everything, I can't do anything right. I've messed up so much recently and it's impossible to get back. *All Me* I take a look at my life and realize how much I've messed up There's nothing good about it I've lost all hope Sometimes I wish I could fix everything or at least do something I don't know what to do All I know is that I've lost you and my closest friends too That is enough to kill my heart Because I finally realized it was me from the start "Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing" |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this was great but i do hope that things do work out fine in the end.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I hope everything gets better in your life soon. Your poem expressed your regret and frustration (at least that's what I sensed)well, good job  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker [URL=http://www.thehungersite.com]http://www |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
tq_99: Hi. I can relate to this poem because me and my best friend of 6 years now were having problems but they have been worked out. So don't give up and even if it was your fault if shes a true friend she will come around, it just may take some time for the pain to heal. Good luck! I like your quote also.~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
well this is a great piece that needs more replies, hey guys replie more to other poems then just mine i think 134 enough i mean i got 130 then this poem well sorry i sound like a big meanny but im depressed and well i love your poem "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Great job on this poem. I can sort of relate. My best friend lives many miles a way now and I feel our relationship deteriorating, and I sometimes feel like the biggest screw up in the world. But life always goes on and I always have a chance to make things better. As do you. Good luck to ya. IsGona< !signature--> "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ [This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 12-15-2000).] |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
hey great poem!! just stay positive things will work out in the end |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
I know how you feel, I just lost my best friend too. This was a great poem and you really let it all loose. Great job and keep writing, it helps. ~Carly |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
i hope things start getting better for you soon....but i liked your poem... |
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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
Great poem. Hope things will look up for you from here on. Keep working on this friendship and I hope it'll go well. apsara |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Excellent write... Ya know, we all make mistakes so don't be too too hard on yourself... Hugs2U coco |
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