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Every Time I think, I think of You
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Every Time I think, I think of You |
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~SwEEt_LiL_GirL~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 21 |
Every time i think i think of you... I think of your warm smile, Your beautiful eyes, Looking right into mine and easing my pain Every time i think, i think of you... I think of the way you want to hold me from the pain in the world, The way your arms wrap around me and comfort my soul. Every time i think, i think of you... When a tear runs down my check, I would feel your warm hand whip away my tears. Every time i think, i think of you... Even when i'm mad, You'll be sitting there listening to me, Wondering how "You can take away my fear's in my heart..." Every time i think, i think of you... Whenever there's no one around, I always see you there waiting for me, Hand extend toward me, Wanting to help and hold me, Every time i think, I think of you.... |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
this was a really good poem..its nice to find someone who will always be there for u and who can help you through the rough times in your life..but i relaly likes this poem.. |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I really liked this poem...i can definately relate to it cuz i have someone like the person your talking about in the poem. I loved this and your very lucky to have someone like this in your life. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
It's always a blessing to have a person like this to be with you and help you out. Good writing. xoxo Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think you did a good job on this! I can't help but wonder though: is this person with you now and you're glad, or are you writing this because they aren't anymore? Just a thought of mine. Good job!  "I think of the way you want to hold me from the pain in the world, The way your arms wrap around me and comfort my soul." < !signature--> "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 11-24-2000).] |
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~SwEEt_LiL_GirL~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 21 |
xShUgArHiGhx: Thanks for the responds and thinking that i'm good.. Which i'm not, just made that one up in about 2 min's didn't really put much effort into it. I could of but i'm not to reading to deep into things to be hurt!! so yeah.. talk to you later... hope you had a wonderful thanksgiving!! Kimmy: Thanks for the support, hope you had a wonderful thanksgiving!! take care! Jenn Cirrincione: Thanks for the support and thank you i know its a blessing to have someone so close.. Lakewalker: to answer your question, i'm with that person right now, doesn't mean i've lost them.. Hmmm you have a cerious mind!!! thanks!! |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
This is wonderful YEah i thought it almost sounded like it was about someone who had died and you still thought of them every day Keep up the great work tho~!*DQ*!~ "A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
this was great. keep it up!! glad to hear the person is still with yOu!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Having someone like this in your life is the best...Having someone there for you when you need them the most...To just be there for you too...Good work!!! People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
this is really sweet. it's nice to see that someone is contented with what life has to offer to them. We've had too many painful poems in passions. Nice to know you're doing good. thanks for the read I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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