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How Dare You (please read)
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How Dare You (please read) |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733
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~I'm sorry I haven't been posting, things have been going on, I'll try~ How Dare You You called again Out of nowhere For no reason You act like you care It's been how long? And your still singing That same old song Go on and throw your little fit She doesn't need this in her life She doesn't want it Nor does she care When in her life Have you ever been there And how dare you insult him You think you're so perfect You wouldn't have gone out on a limb You wouldn't have supported all those kids You wouldn't have come close to what he did He wasn't perfect No he had his faults But he was far closer to it than you He doesn't deserve your childish insults You're 45 now? Could've fooled me You could pass for 13 With your immaturity You even insult your mother Blame all mistakes on her You just want to make an excuse For the father you never were Mom said she may have two or maybe only a year Do you have any idea How that hurt to hear I've already lost one grandparent Now there might be two I don't mean to blame But some blame should be put on you Oh yes she's to blame to for your son Yet who was left holding the bag When you got scared and decided to run Please just grow up You old childish fool Start acting your age Step up from grade school I pray that God Forgive me for what I think and do Because I want nothing To do with you - Written about my "uncle," who I claim as a blood relation but nothing more. The reference to the man is my grandfather, who died June 22, 1999 - |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Awww hun this poem was so emotional and powerful...I can't even begin to imagine what you must be going through. I really hope things work out for the best. This was a very good piece. Thank you for sharing it with us. ~Kris~ ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ ~Won't you come and hold my hand? This world has taken me as far as it can... wit |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
hmm..this is how i feel about my dad..sucks and the only thing you can do is keep your mouth shut and move on, im sorry ~!*DQ*!~ "A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think that this one expresses your feelings well. It's really good  And we know everyone has lives we have to live, so we understand if you take a little break from here. Just don't stay away too long "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hey all, thanks for replying. Kandi- Thanks, but I loose no tears over him. He's attempted to weave in and out of our lives since I was about 2, and didn't speak to us for years, then when my grandfather died he tried to act like the perfect son. That didn't last too long, and he's drifted back and forth a little since then. The irony here is how he got married to a woman who already had 3 children, like my grandfather, except he handled it completely different. Okok I'll shut up now!! Thanks so much. DancinQueen- Yeah, I know. It must be so much harder when it's a parent. Good luck and thanks Lakewalker- I'm glad you understand, I'll try to respond more. Yeah, I wrote this when I was kinda mad, can ya tell  . Again, thanks so much, I really appreciate it Bel |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
The poem was powerful. I don't like to read things like this. It's a shame you think of yer uncle like that but he deserves it ya know? Oh well.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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