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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2000-11-20 04:06 PM

You make me completely miserable,
Is it that hard to see?
I have tears coming down my face,
You dont believe it?
Look at me.
You have so much power,
Over my heart and mind.
I use to be in control,
It's like i've been redesigned.
You speak a word,
I cry.
You Speak another,
I smile.
Pick me up,
Throw me down,
It's been a game,
All this while.
Im tired of being tossed,
From left to right.
I get through my day,
And cry throughout the night.
This isnt how it should be,
Something out of place.
I wish i remembered the last time,
A natural smile spread across my face.
Oh dear boy...
Why cant you see?
Open yor eyes,
Look what your doing to me!

~*~PrettyGirly~*~
Member

since 2000-11-04

Posts 83
Fitchburg Ma Usa

1 posted 2000-11-20 04:20 PM

thats how i feel, because sometimes my boyfriend can be so nice then the next day will be so nice. i threw him out of my life on....good poem by the way.. bye ~*~Minna~*~

IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

2 posted 2000-11-20 04:24 PM

This was a very nice poem.  this is my favorite part:

You Speak another,
     I smile.
   Pick me up,
  Throw me down,
It's been a game,
  All this while.

Thx you for the read.
IsGona

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN"
~Hatebreed~

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

3 posted 2000-11-20 04:54 PM

Oh what men can do to our poor little hearts! I understand this one immensely! I'm sorry you are going through this... If at all possible, although it's much easier said than done, get out! Leave him, ignore him, forget him... whatever it takes. There is life away from this guy, I've been there, and it's true!

xoxo (Ps, take a look at my quote...)
Jenn< !signature-->

"Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC

[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 11-20-2000).]

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2000-11-21 04:42 PM

Thanks everyone for your replies!

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

5 posted 2000-11-22 04:02 PM

Have you talked with him about what he's doing to you? Anyway, this poem is really good, I like the flow of it. Great job

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2000-11-25 01:26 AM

I really liked this poem but the situation is unfortunate. I hope all is well soon!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2000-12-03 05:03 PM

i have read a lot of your poems, and i've noticed that you've written most of them to this certain guy. The thing is all i can see is that all he's doing to you is hurting you. maybe you need to look into your poems again and try to find the answer to this problem. thnanks for the read

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Slim
Junior Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 49
Kentucky, USA

8 posted 2000-12-04 07:37 PM

this was a very good poem. i really liked it. you should trying telling this person how you feel. keep your head up it'll be okay!!

"just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible"

Dean
Member

since 1999-11-23

Posts 120
Canada

9 posted 2000-12-04 10:04 PM

Tight poem girly! I liked it very much, You should show this peson you speak of your poem, so he knows how you feel. I know if I got a poem like this from my girl it would make me serously think about my actions and what I was doing!

Deano< !signature-->

"Live to love or why live at all"
Deano

[This message has been edited by Dean (edited 12-04-2000).]

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

10 posted 2000-12-04 11:16 PM

hey hey!! This rocked as always! I've been reading your work for awhile now..and im with acire. Sounds like things havent been going too well, and im the queen of that one

So if u ever wanna talk just mail me!!

KEep up the great work

~!*DQ*!~

"A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else"

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