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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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All the waves of good and bad, Happy and sad, and the like. Try to smile, sometimes just can't. When the happy days come back, laugh off the rest very swiftly. When a boy breaks the heart, you've cared for so well, When a teacher cuts you down, Or a friend breaks the trust, All of the laughs go away, where are we now? It comes to a point where it should just all go away, Leave you alone, so you can make your way through. How hard this all seems, how trivial it may be. Your world is not ending, but that's so hard just to see. Let us be ready for tomorrow, and try to remedy today. Allow wishful thinking to be your guide, and let love be your path. Try to see the sun through all the gray. Those sad things cannot hurt us, unless allowed. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Jenn! What a wonderfully positive message you've penned, and so true. Each day is what "we" make of it. Nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"Let us be ready for tomorrow, and try to remedy today. Allow wishful thinking to be your guide, and let love be your path. Try to see the sun through all the gray. Those sad things cannot hurt us, unless allowed" I LOVE this! Sometimes we do need wishful thinking to get through our days, especally when we're teenagers. What you've written here is so true, and so beautiful. Keep up the great work! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Jenn- This is really lovely. What a wonderful message you've penned here... thanks for sharing it. *smiles*, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thanks to you all for your replies.... I understand the truth in what I've written, now, if I could only live it! Thank you again. xoxo Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This on is really great. I like the positive advice you give in this: "Allow wishful thinking to be your guide, and let love be your path." I liked what you said in your reply, "if I could only live it!" Great job on this "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
As it always was Jenn, beautiful!!!Its really good to see you posting again. I havent seen any new poems by you, but then again I dont come on like I used to. I dont have much time anymore. But keep it up!!! People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thank you Erin & Lakewalker for your replies. Erin, it's true I haven't posted that much, been a bit preoccupied myself. I'm glad to be posting on occasion once again. Lakewalker, yeah, well, it's true, if we could all live that life, instead of just thinking like that, the world would be happier. Thanks again... xoxo Jenn< !signature--> "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 11-21-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
OOoooo Aaaaaaaa i liked it.......i just named one of my poems wishful thinkin.........very nice. i liked this one!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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