Teen Poetry #3 |
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im a flame in a fire (plz read and reply) |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada ![]() |
well I dont know how many poems like this i have written but its not many so bear w/ me.plz reply .Ina I'm a flame in a fire, wanting to be released but never will be wanting you to come and extinguish my burning desire... please don't leave me now we have only begun you just might be the love of my life but I know you don't care if I crackle and slowly die away for I am just a little flame not fully formed, but please what look I'm stronger than I used to be, look I'm more dangerous, I can hurt people too wait for me, I love you You turn around and stare deeply into my burning desire and sizzle away my heart is broken, because im just another flame in the fire. ~ina~ |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great Ina. Pretty sad though....just another flame in the fire. Lost within the mesh of fire without your own true identity. Hey, it happens to the best of us (i.e. me hehe)....keep that head up cutie! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was a really awesome poem, it had a lot of meaning behind it although it was pretty sad. Getting lost in the crowd does suck...great job |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
This poem has a meaning behind it that many people including me have felt at least once in their life. I have always wanted to write a poem about this but I could never find the words. Now I don't have too because you just described it perfectly. Remember, you are not alone in this. Hang in there and keep up the good work. Laterz. "Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts." |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think you did a really good job with this one, I like it ![]() "my heart is broken, because im just another flame in the fire." "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hmmmmm it's different alright, it leans into story telling. But I still like it. thanks for sharing Ina. keep it coming I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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