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Fearless_Angel
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 57
Calgary, AB Canada

0 posted 2000-11-14 10:58 PM


You and Me

As memories fade along with the sun,
I feel like our love has just begun.
The moon, the stars...
All up in the sky,
Look down at us and then pass by.
The mysterious smile on your face,
Makes my heart skip a pace.
I get lost in the moment,
As we kiss.
My hand in yours,
So safe adn secure.
Our breathing,
So teady and pure.
You and me,
Together as one.



© Copyright 2000 Annnie - All Rights Reserved
Fearless_Angel
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 57
Calgary, AB Canada
1 posted 2000-11-14 11:15 PM


Hey Caz:
    I'm really glad I talked to you tonite! You're so sweet! Thanks for always being there for meeh. This is the poem I wrote for you like I promised...Hope you like okies? Wellz, gotta go remember I love you!

Lotsa Love,
Angel
xoxoxo

"Take care and remember a certain innocent lil' Angel will always be there for you..."


Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2000-11-15 03:57 PM


A sweet tribute to Caz. I am most positive he will adore it.
Great job!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Caz
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since 2000-09-13
Posts 133
ConcepciĆ³n, Chile
3 posted 2000-11-15 09:06 PM


  I feel so special, thanks for this. I'm so happy, it makes me feel great. You're so sweet and caring and I love you. You're great, I hope to see you soon again, don't forget to message me. Bye,  
Your friend,  
Caz

It's been raining since you left me.

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
4 posted 2000-11-16 08:11 PM


This is such a good poem, I like it a lot.  I would quote my favorite part but the whole thing is really good!   < !signature-->

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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[This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 11-16-2000).]

Acies
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5 posted 2000-11-17 04:46 PM


it's really nice to see each poet dedicating one for the other.  Hope we get more of these kind of poems here in passions.  great write

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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