Teen Poetry #3 |
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How Can I Face The Day? |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
How can I face the day without you by myside you said Minna you can do anything once you do it I rolled my eyes because I knew I couldn't do anything everyone in the hospital room looked at me I wanted out. Later on that day I went fo a walk around thought what you've taught me you've always been there for me you've never given up in life I said I have to be strong for him when I came back I had chocolate on my lap you said you went for some chocolate I see I said yes you smiled at me. When we were going home that night I thought of what you've done I thought of what we've done in our lives I thought how we'd go out and laugh, talk I wasn't ever going to see you again I was hurting like a shot. I was so confuesed lost, worried, sad, I got advise from someone walk for your dad. But the next day you were taken by GOD never saw you again I thought you came home you never did........... Your watching from above and happy..but we miss you down here ******************************************** RIP Mikko t Talviharju 2-21-43 to 12-23-99 If I could walk I'd be glad..But I'm glad the way I am- ~*~me~*~ |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
THIS WAS SO SAD. i am so sorry that you lost someone in your life. it's always a tragedy when someone close leaves you for heaven, hang in there ![]() Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
The poems you write about your father and to him are always so great. I'm sorry he had to leave, but I'm glad you realize he is watching over you now ![]() "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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LoveBug![]()
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Hon, I'm so sorry that this had to happen to you. It's so hard to lose a loved one, but you can go on remembering the love that they gave you. This is a beautiful tribute. Keep up the great work! False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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branden726![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Touching, very very touching ya know im really hard to hear this but its a wonderful poem and from what ive learned the worst things in life make the best poems thanks for sharing it "put the name of the person u love, not in a heart because they alway break but put it in a circle which last forever" |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was really sad. sorry.. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is so sadly sweet. I know how you feel. My father died the day before my 13th birthday and each year is difficult. I think God takes special people as Angels when he needs them most. Your dad is watching over you, as mine is over me. If you ever want to talk, please email me or find me on ICQ. I'm always here for you. |
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