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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Eternal caring, Standing by eachothers sides. Handing eachother Kleenex, Crying out our eyes. Being together always, Never losing sight. Talking during the day, Dreaming of one another during the night. Your full of so much goodness, Your full of so much sin. Inside that heart and mind of yours, Is where the darkness lives. You make me sick to my stomache, Then smile from ear to ear. Create emotional abuse, Then gently calms my fears. You make me laugh, You force tears from my eyes. Your the reason i live, The reason i want to die. Sometimes i dont think you care, Though im capable of pulling your heart from your chest. By a slit of my wrist, You weap in distress. You've made me happy, 100 reasons on a list. You've Emotionally beaten me, Then try to fix it by a healing kiss. You want to lean and me, And i on you. I cant lean anymore, I'm afraid of what you'll do. [This message has been edited by xShUgArHiGhx (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
Your poem shows haunting confusion and exhaustion by everything in the end. I guess that's what I could gather from it and somehow I can relate to it right now but not exactly in the same way. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. Very confusing indeed.. I liked the way you portrayed your confusion. It was a great poem, and I wish you luck with sorting out all this stuff. ~Carly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Well I hope you still have someone to lean on, the world can be very rough. Good job on the poem  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Tia Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 41massachusetts |
i love this poem. it is exactly how i feel with someone i love. i have been trying to find the right words to fit my feelings and you have done it for me. good job and thank you! Tia |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow. I think that I've felt that before! You think you're happy, but really you're not. In so many ways you need to get out of your relationship... but then it feels so good to be with that person. Sorry if I misinterpreted, but that's what I got from it. Good job. Jenn< !signature--> "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 11-11-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this was great shugar! Another wonderful piece!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hey Sugar --- I don't know about emotional abuse . You should stay away from this person. I mean NOW!!! One day he might even go farther than emotional abuse. Hope you know what i mean. This guy has to go!!! I'm sorry if you don't agree with me. < !signature--> I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR [This message has been edited by acire (edited 11-27-2000).] |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Awwww hun ((hugs)) I can relate a little to your confusion, but on a totally lower level. The emotion and frustration in this is amazing! Wonderfully expressed. But I have to agree with Acire...anyone who can make your mind feel so "abused" is not worth it...you deserve so much more! Hope everything works out. All the best. Keep your head up and SMILE! ~Kris ~*Won't you come and hold my hand? This world has taken me as far as it can... without your smile.~* ~*If I never said I'm sorry, then I'm wrong, |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
All will be well...it will work out for u. i think i can say I used to feel like in a relationship it isnt good!!!I agree with anyone who says u got to get rid of him...sorry if that offends...great piece Regina akaIna |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Shugar~ I am not gonna tell you what to do I am just gonna tell you my opinion. You want to lean and me, And i on you. I cant lean anymore, I'm afraid of what you'll do. This part really got to me. My friend has been in a abusive relationship for the past 3 years. And she wont do anything about it. First it started with emotional, then he got physical. She has 2 kids with him now. So he is in her life forever. He did this to trap her. And it worked. I dont know what to say. But try to talk to this guy. No girl deserves to be abuse in any way. People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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