Teen Poetry #3 |
rtWhat Are We? |
Zombie Man Member
since 1999-06-22
Posts 52Va |
what are we? Always talking to each other at night until light of day. You say we are just friends. But its more than just that. We seem like a couple. When you are crying you come to me instead of you boyfriend. People always say we should be more than just friends. But what do you think? Should we be more then what we are? Or stay the way we already are. So what is it. Are we just friends or something more? |
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Wisdom New Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 8 |
good poem. You should tell your friend how you feel and sort it out. keep up the good work. ONE. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hey, good poem. I can kinda relate- people always used to tell me I should go out with one of my guy-friends, even when I had a boyfriend. Well, good luck, I hope it all works out! Bel |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes i also hope it all works out for you. and you should show this to her it just might make her realize what see has with you. well great read and i would love to see more. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
well i think that you should just be direct towards this girl...tell her how you feel because maybe she feels the same way towards you but she doesnt know how you feel...you know what i mean???some girls are shy...i know that i am...and i know that i would be embarassed to tell a guy how i feel about him...and if she doesnt feel the same way just forget that it ever happened...but if shes crying to you instead of her boyfriend...sounds that she would rather have you comfort her them him... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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