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Everything & All To Me
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Everything & All To Me |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia 
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Everything & All To Me: In everything you do In everything you say You are the one and only Everything and all to me You mean to me the world & so much more than that I believe you are my soulmate Everything and all to me I can trust you with my heart I can tell you everything You’re my best friend in this world Everything and all to me I’m so comfortable when with you We understand each other well I love you with all my everything Everything and all to me * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
this was a nice poem. keep it up!  San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Stephanya Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 63Berkshire County~USA~ |
That was a very sweet poem. Whoever it's about is a very lucky person. (:***stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." :: |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, This is so good! It really sounds like you're committed to this person from the poem. I absolutely love the first stanza of this, it just seems so cool. Ok, I better stop typing before I obsess, but good job < !signature-->"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 11-06-2000).] |
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Slim Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 49Kentucky, USA |
you put so much feeling into your words.. i loved this poem. this person must really mean a lot to you... great job! "just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great poem about this one special person in your life......lucky!!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
you have written your feelings so well on this one. He must be a very special person in your eyes. I'm glad i found apoem of contentment today. It's all been sad. Thanks for the sweet read I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
This poem was really good...you're so lucky to have someone like this in your life. I loved your first two lines!!! |
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