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Craziness Falls |
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liqwidnik Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 33Mantua, NJ, USA |
******These are just a few thoughts that were in my head don't get it it's me.******* midnight sky feelin high stars at night feel just right purple passions alarm the world rainbows of the world colors abound on the ground in the sky mindlessly falling crazily sane Feeling "We can not truely love someone with whom we never laugh"- Agnes Repplier |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is just fine. I liked it....a bit of a free flow feeling and i like that about it. Wonderful!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yeah, I like it, these are some interesting thoughts. Good job  These two words just caught my attention "crazily sane", I love it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I liked this one...free style is a nice change to rhyming and stuff over flowing with meaning and passion. It had a light sense of meaning to it..i liked it!! |
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Slim Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 49Kentucky, USA |
i really liked this. it flows good. i could think about it with many different meanings. nice job! "just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
honestly, I'd like you to help me understand the poem. I've read it a couple times already and i don't want to misread it. So, if you please, help me a bit I'd appreciate it I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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