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Wisdom
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since 2000-06-25
Posts 8


0 posted 2000-06-28 02:36 AM


I found you at last,
And with this love,
Ends my hurtful past,
Of rejection and of tears.

The smile on your face,
In that single moment,
In that random place,
Gets rid of all of my fears.

With your love I'm strong again,
And I try to remember how long it's been,
since I felt this way,
But when I try I only smile and sigh think of just this day.

You were wearing a skirt,
That just made my chest hurt,
As you were walking down the street,
And at that time you blew my mind,
And I knew we had to meet.

     To Be Concluded

* They say pain and suffering let you know your alive, but what good is that to a person who feels so heartless like me?




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Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-06-28 02:42 AM


great poem and i hope you meet her and you to hook up or something whatever it is that your looking for. good luck

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-11-18 03:33 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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