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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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sitting here staring through tear blurred eyes, i wish we didnt meet this way, i dont to break your heart but i have to more than u know or ever know how much i hurt right now all wanted was that u say those words, "ya im the guy who went camp sans souci, with regina" but u said"thats another guy" how could u do this!!! I loved u! i tryed to quit drugs for u, u know im going to start all over again but this time im going to end it all, because that way i wont need to think about u anymore, pretend im dead, pretend i never existed, tell everyone i was a figment of your imagination tell them im gone forever but please just forget me forget how u loved me forget how I loved u ~Ina~ |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Um, it was a great poem...I'm not even going to start on the subjects adressed in it...so yeah..great poem... ~Carly< !signature--> i didnt say it was about suicide, did i? The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of. [This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
HEY GUYS THIS POEM DOESNT HAVE TO DO WITH SUICiDe ALRIGHT!!!!! ~Ina~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Well I guess I did think it was talking about that for a mintue there. But I'm glad to hear that it's not, and this is a good poem! If only it were easy to do this: "but please just forget me forget how u loved me forget how I loved u"< !signature--> "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
I guess ill reply before this gets probably taking off because of you and i quote saying that "end it all" But hey good poem and If you were smart you'd stay off drugs ne ways cuz trust me most of my family not immediate just like all my cuzins and my aunts are like crackheads it ruins your life bud! WAKE UP! "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
everyone this poems has nothing to do with SUICIDE yes there is something about drugs but im not doing any!! I have woken up. its not the best day when u r forbidden to communicate with a best friend and someone who u will love forever Ina plz dont take it off! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
OK everybody listen up here........it's not about suicide........what she's reffering to by "ending it all" in this poem is ending the FRIENDSHIP or the lOVE.....not her life. So no worries people. Oh and i see no reason to take this poem off the board and lock it. I think it's just fine. Stop giving Ina a hard time. The poem is good.....keep it up Ina.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
If I was "giving Ina a hard time" I'm sorry, I wasn't meaning to. I understand the poem how it was meant to be taken, as you said. Like I said before: this is a good poem!  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
thank you Javier..u came t my rescue....lol well anyways i took your advice on the calling card....thanks everyone else for your responses |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Alright, the poem- it was good, very well written. The message- obviously this a$$(don't know his name) wasn't good enough for you, you're probably better off without him. I won't give you a lecture, you've already gotten enough of those, and who am I to give you one, I don't even know you(which probably isn't a good thing). So anyway, smile and keep writing Bel Beautiful is empty Beautiful is free Beautiful loves no one Beautiful stripped me -"Beautiful" CREED |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
thank u for that Isabel, its better that i not know u to and btw u r wrong it was about losing someone i love because my mother forbid me from communicating with him, sorta like romeo and juliet.....and he is more than i deserve.....and he cant believe he forgot to tell my mom that little favor so in a way we are both deeply hurt. Ina |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Um....Ina.....if I offended you I totally did not mean to. When I said it was probably a bad thing....I meant that it was probably a bad thing that I didn't know you...not a good thing.  Geeeeez I feel bad now!! Okay so I obviously didn't read the thing about your mom or just spaced it, sorry...I really hope I didn't offend you!!Bel |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
its cool im sorry.. i need to chill out...a very sensitive subject for me....sorry....im very stressed Sincerly sorry ~Ina~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Ina -- Are you talking about suicide? Just kidding  lolSeems you've given up on this person. One thing, if someone's worth it, go for it. Life is never easy, specially the one's you wanna have has this thing about being a lot harder to get. Thanks for sharing this poem I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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