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*Nene* Junior Member
since 2000-03-15
Posts 16 |
All it took was a little time I've been watching you I told you if I thought about it I'd grow on you All I needed was time to think it through I've seen the way you walk, talk and act You show you really do want me And you'll always have my back You've been persistent and straight foward I like you even more for that You make my happy And I know that it's you who's real right now You, the one, that I want right now |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was sweet Nene ... it sounds like persistence is paying off, I hope all works out for you both!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I dont think I've ever read any of your poems before, so, hi! This poem is very nice, it tells about this well. Good job on it  "All it took was a little time" "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well ive never read any of your poems either. But hey this was a great start. I liked it a lot.........time is of the essence "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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