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hoppy
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since 2000-01-27

Posts 271

0 posted 2000-06-27 01:36 AM

Sea of Irony

my heart's hanging open can't you see
i'm bleeding on the floor
losing my mind in a sea of irony
the forgotten came back last night
came back and i opened the door
thought i'd have one last look
thought it was her at my door

i was wrong last night
opening my door i seen
nothing but shadows
chanting of her vanity

the darnkess grabed me
wrenching me to the ground
death had come to take me
killing myself is what i found

so i unlocked myself
let it be free
i lost my mind back there
in a sea of irony

---Written by:Hoppy
2-12-00

There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line.
-- Oscar Levant

"Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live."

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

1 posted 2000-06-27 02:15 AM

wonderful piece keep it up. and keep posting

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2000-06-27 02:46 AM

This is a really good poem Hoppy. I liked the emotions and the message conveyed throughout it.

Nice work

~AF~

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

3 posted 2000-06-27 01:44 PM

This is a very powerful and well-written piece, my friend. Irony is enough to make you lose your mind, I know. I hope things go better for you!

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

Vball Chickie1624
Member

since 2000-05-14

Posts 116
New York

4 posted 2000-06-28 08:24 AM

Execellent poem. I look forward to reading more. Keep writing

Luv ya,
Danielle

"Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you

tearsinheaven
Junior Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 18

5 posted 2000-06-28 12:59 PM

This poem really hit home for me. i know how it feels to be "going mad". it experssed it very well, i hope you write more!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-11-18 04:27 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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