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Teen Poetry #3

the eve of the trees

Comfrey83
Junior Member

since 2000-04-02

Posts 36
Winchester, Mass USA

0 posted 2000-06-26 07:45 PM

a elm stood here awhile back
and now the world has one more lack
for now instead theres grey and black
for now the world has one more lack

for trees, some think may come and go
yet heres the thing theyll never know
there is a color save grey and black
oh yes the world has one more lack

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

1 posted 2000-06-27 12:52 PM

i don't really get the grey and black part unless its dirt. but i do get the point the world does lack trees and the more we destroy the more we kill ourselves off. great piece of work loved it. you seem to think kind of like me if my reply is correct.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2000-06-27 02:43 AM

If I said anything else I would just be reapeating what Jeremiah said so good work. I liked the whole message in it.

~AF~

"Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-11-18 03:32 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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