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IsGona
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since 2000-07-14
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0 posted 2000-10-19 12:35 PM



I was surrounded by darkness
No light to be seen
Then the news came
It had to be a dream

You were here
I'd just gotten word
I sat here in shock
Confused by what i'd heard

Maybe this is it
Our chance to make it right
Could you have come back to me
Is all I can think about tonight

Guess it pays to pray
No more tears to fall
The time has come
For me to have it all

I sit here tonight
Wondering if you'll call
Should I pick up the phone
Is it too soon to have it all

Advice i take with stride
some say i should wait
not sure what i feel
others say don't hesitate

my world was so normal
the routine a bit mondain
the thought of you never left
but i pushed aside the pain

my world has been torn
thrown upside down
and now i must pretend again
to be happy when you're not around

i want to be with you
my tomorrow is in your hands
all i want is forever
my only demand

I'm glad your hear
Happy as I could be
But things were easier
when you were only a vision
for my mind to see

i want to know this will work
i wish i could find a way
to tell you everything
and not worry about you'll say

you said you loved me
but i wonder if you still do
with a new found freedom
were your words untrue

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN"
~Hatebreed~
"I am, who I am
and what you think,
I don't give a damn"
Chilli Peppers


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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-10-19 08:52 AM


The only thing you could do is pick up the phone and call and find out the answers...So what are you waiting for???Do it...

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
2 posted 2000-10-19 10:55 AM


I agree with Erin. The only thing to do is find out. If you don't, you'll always be left to wonder, and believe me, that's no way to live. Go call and find out, in the long run you'll be glad of it, no matter the imidiate result. Nice Poem BTW

"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
3 posted 2000-10-19 01:31 PM


I agree with the other two...pick up the phone...Reach out and love someone  




~*~SCG~*~

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
4 posted 2000-10-19 04:41 PM


Yeah yeah yeah, just pick up the phone. it's not easy to just pick up the phone and call, now is it.  But you should.  So don't back down and say there will be a chance later, because maybe there won't be.  Those are just my thoughts though   good poem!  

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Dopey Dope
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Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
5 posted 2000-10-19 07:12 PM


Well i'll just have to say this: Don't pick up the phone and wait for that person to call you....YOU CALL THAT PERSON!!!!
WAITING SUCKS!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Acies
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6 posted 2000-10-19 08:35 PM


I disagree with everyone else.  Don't pick the phone up.  Comfront him in person.  That's the best way of doin it. Let him answer you face to face.  So, go comfront him

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
7 posted 2000-10-20 10:36 AM


Acire~
Calling on the phone is the same thing as confronting him...No big difference except that its not face to face...Have you ever heard the saying...

"If you were gonna die and were only able to make one call to apologize, say I love you,(etc..). Who would you call? And why are you waiting?"

I heard another one similar to that to but I cant remember it right now...


~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

IsGona
Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723

8 posted 2000-12-23 11:38 AM


hmmm... this is kinda wierd.  
I wanted to find out if I had posted a particular poem or not so while looking through my old posts I found this.  A great poem, but not by me.  It's weird how much I can relate to this poem and that some how it ended up being posted under my name.  Maybe I wrote it subconsciously or something... LOL I doubt it.  So anyhow I was just wondering if any one recogizes this poem and knows who wrote it.  To who ever it is that wrote it, good poem. I enjoyed the read.

IsGona< !signature-->

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~


[This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 12-23-2000).]

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