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Nikkisweet
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 183
Tx, Dallas

0 posted 2000-10-15 08:28 PM



I'm in love!
This feeling's so great
I've never been more happier
I'm going to fly though the ceiling at this rate!

He means everything to me
His words just touch my heart
We get along so well
I don't think anything could keep us apart

Sooner or later though
I'll be in tears
This feeling won't last
But I know he'll come and dry my tears fast

Maybe I'm kidding myself
Oh well
Whoever thinks it won't happen
Can just go to _ _ _ _

They don't understand
Our love is so strong
And if they still don't think it won't work out
I've got somthing to tell them: You're wrong!

I know I'm going crazy
It's probably these caffine pills I ate
But to tell you the truth
Being in love is great!!!

*I'm truly sorry if this offended anyone, I just wrote what I felt.  Please don't take offence to it..I don't anyone to be on my bad side*


~Guys are like stars,
there are millions
of them, but only
one can make you dreams
come true~

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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
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Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
1 posted 2000-10-15 08:43 PM


Hey being in love is great and no, you didn't offend me and i don't see how you can offend anybody at that by this. Keep it up and good luck!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
2 posted 2000-10-15 09:33 PM


I love it...I'm glad to see happy people in here thought it's only once in a while   You expressed yourself really good and I'm happy for ya.  i wish you the best

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
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3 posted 2000-10-16 12:19 PM


Yeah, how could this offend someone?  I think it's good

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
4 posted 2000-10-16 02:57 PM


Good one...I dont know how this could offend anyone though...You expressed what you are feeling and in a really good way...Sounds like you are one happy girl...

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

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