Teen Poetry #3 |
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Nobility |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
-=Nobility=- For long has the evil smile of the Archduke of Happiness held true. for long it has. is it perhaps because of some plan he has? or is it maybe something we cant understand? the Dutches died, months ago it was. her ghost still roams. for long it has. the castles built in the nothingness of time; the roads that take you to the vanishing dream of reality. the architect we cant understand. the smile is one of fear. the smile is one of hope. has the Archduke gone mad? -Morouxshi San [This message has been edited by Morouxshi San (edited 10-15-2000).] |
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Child of the Stars![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey! This was pretty cool. I didn't get most of it hehe but oh well it was cool anyways!!happy writing!! "I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I read this one a couple times and didn't get it at first but now I think I do. Nicely done! And just a side question, how long have you been writing poems? "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
glad you like it. ive been writting poetry like since ninth (like dopey). cant really give a date cause i dont date my work. (maybe i should) San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yes, me and san started around the same time. Oddly enough.....san and me are STILL writing. Good job my boy! Anyway the poem was interesting.......And yes, I think the archduke went mad because happiness , like you said, comes in many forms.....and damnit.....sometimes people just don't know how to get the archduke to converse with them a bit. I would think being lonely is a pisser ![]() "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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