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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
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0 posted 2000-10-14 02:29 PM


This is just free verse again, something that was in my head..well the beginning lines and now I finally got it out Has no real meaning really, nothing about my past..sometimes I just like to write things even if they are from my own lil fantasy world and it's not so bad there =Þ


There's a letter in my head
Brandshing and longing to be sent
Alas it will continue to collect
Cobbwebbs and attract the spiders found in my head
It will be eternal
Never shall it ever be dead
For they are things that are truly meant to be said

But how can I face you now?
After this ordeal
And after the long tedious years
How will I ever know how you feel?
So I wonder how much longer can I keep up these nerves of steel
When in my dreams your ghost comes and takes away my sanity
Along with my ever existing vanity

It's hard to look in the mirror now
Seeing, reflecting in my eyes
All of those sweet sweet lies
And all the words that lie within the imaginary paper within my mind
Someday perhaps I will find
That time will be truly kind
And those words would dissappear
And I will no longer be haunted by your lingering ghost...

"Fear not, my dear for I am forever here, never leaving never steering clear of any dangers that lie deep within your heart" ~moi~

© Copyright 2000 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
Lakewalker
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1 posted 2000-10-14 04:26 PM


You've written down these thoughts well. I like this, it seems as if thre really is a feeling behind it, even if you claim there is not.  Anyway, nice job

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
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2 posted 2000-10-14 06:50 PM


Wow you expressed what you wanted to say very well!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

Acies
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3 posted 2000-10-14 06:54 PM


I find this hard to be of no meaning at all.  So much expression is in this poem that I can hardly believe that a fantasy world is capable of giving a person these kind of emotions.  very good writing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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4 posted 2000-10-14 08:18 PM


Well hey great poem and thanks for your reply on my poem. it was refreshing to see such a long post on one of my poems. Anyway im glad your friend liked my little quote thingy. Dont say your not a good poet cuz you are, have pride in what you do. Never let down or diss on your own work. IF anything just be bias about it. Ok so great job! BYE!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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