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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
I struck out again, how much longer does this go on? this streak that seems to never finish. it has been months since I've even been on base. what is this? will I never cross home plate again? Is that what this means? |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Interesting toughts, well done on this one  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
nice comparison. you a baseball fan? San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*smirks* i like baseball!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
The title is perfect for this Jose...Good one too!!!I always get frustrated at the littlest things...And give up but keep trying...So just keep trying it will happen!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
thanks lakewalker, I have enough bad luck to write volumes about it san: yes I am a baseball fan. I'm still mad that my country took 2nd place in the olympics, that never happens, the poem is not really about baseball however dopey: I'm in a batting slump Erin: I hope so! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
i like the molding of baseball and feelings to relate to your problems, just remain a contender and hit a homerun! jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I Got a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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