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Nikkisweet
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 183
Tx, Dallas

0 posted 2000-10-13 09:10 PM

Roses are red
Yes that's true
But if you don't put them in water
They'll be dead too
Violets are blue
That's also true
They are found in pastures
With cows that go Moo!
You are sweet
That's also true
Sneding me roses and violets
That make me go boo hoo
I love you
No that's not true
Cause you took my heart
And ripped it into.

*This is just a silly little poem I wrote when I was in the writing mood and couldn't think of anything better*

~Guys are like stars,
there are millions
of them, but only
one can make you dreams
come true~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2000-10-13 11:19 PM

I like the poem a lot! Like tons! great job...... but a little side note....... your last word "into"....it should be "in two"....ok good job! Post more, bye!

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-10-14 01:19 PM

I like this one, great job writing it

"Roses are red
Yes that's true
But if you don't put them in water
They'll be dead too"

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2000-10-14 06:32 PM

i really really really liked this one

"Violets are blue
That's also true
They are found in pastures
With cows that go Moo!"

I just love this line so much. Spcially the moo part...you just made my day

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

4 posted 2000-10-14 06:48 PM

Nikki~
I liked it...Its different but good!!!

Roses are red
Yes that's true
But if you don't put them in water
They'll be dead too

This part though really got me...Cause I put some roses in water and they died!!!LOL Good job!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

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