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Dopey Dope
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0 posted 2000-10-12 09:44 PM


Coffee:


Waking morning
Daily hell.
Drink your coffee
All is well.

Smile brightly.
Take a sip.
Look at steam.
Burn your lip.

Tastes so great.
Black and hot.
I love coffee
From a pot.




That's IT!!!!!!!!


"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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IsGona
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1 posted 2000-10-12 09:52 PM


This is great.  It made me laugh a little bit.  Poetry is about expressing yourself no matter what it is on your mind.  

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN"
~Hatebreed~
"I am, who I am
and what you think,
I don't give a damn"
Chilli Peppers


Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2000-10-12 09:54 PM


yea i wrote this poem while goofing around. I liked it cuz it was pretty simply written. And it's just about drinking coffee...so hehe..... glad it made you laugh a bit!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Morouxshi San
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3 posted 2000-10-12 10:00 PM


coffee...
that should be peters next adventure.

its all about expressing your mind no matter how weird it turns out.


San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

Lakewalker
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4 posted 2000-10-13 03:01 PM


Simple and short, not your usual, but it's still good   But I don't like coffee (don't hurt me you coffee lovers

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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