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Heavenly Death |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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Heavenly Death The sweet sound of death murmmurs in my ear Looking skyward, tears glimmering in my eyes softly blurred clouds fill the sky, rain falls on my tear smeared eyes footsteps stop ascending skyward I mourn for the wasted life I am The slow rolling of the waves in the distance call my attention away from the cloudy sky then all stops as my world ends, forever has not been long my suffering has ceised The sweet sound of death murmmuring in my ear makes eye end so remeber me, is all i ask |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
This piece is very dark and not exactly my favorite type of poetry. You did an excellent job of expressing your feelings in this piece though. I hope everything is alright with you and if you need to talk about anything, please e-mail me.  When you are old and grey and full of sleep, And nodding by the fire, take down this book, And slowly read, and dream of the soft look Your eyes had once, and of their shodows deep; How many loved your moments of glad grace, And loved your beauty with love false or true, But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you, And loved the sorrows of your changing face... William Butler Yeats |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is interesting, I like how it's written. I wonder why you think you've had a wasteful life?? This is the kind of poem that really gets thoughts moving in my head, nice work. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Ah yes, dark poetry. Very depressing. I hope you are ok....if not....feel free to e-mail.....well ANYBODY! Everybody here at passions is willing to lend a listening ear. Hope all is well!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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